pitch

on 5th October we showed the pitch of our opening sequence to the class. the aim of this was to see of our idea made sense and if nit what we could do so that it made sense. Not only that but it developed other ideas that were suggested by our peers. Our main idea included a girl being killed the school toilets by another girl. she is being killed to stop the pain of her previous injuries, however these are never mentioned in our title sequence. the girl killing her is also unknown to be her friend, acquaintance, family member etc. This would be revealed in the 2nd half of the opening as halfway through the killing she is disturbed by an unknown figure. after that it would switch back to the 'murderer' getting ready, equipped with a knife (the suspected murder weapon) and then answering the door to the victim. by doing this you were able to tell that the girls were both friends.
We got the heads up from our class however, we were asked to think of a different 2nd sequence as a morning routine was very overused, since we were going to have her wake up and step out of bed.