Questions on viewers question sheets:

• what did you understand about the narrative ?
• Did the chosen genre fit the conventions ?
• How did the ending make you feel ?
• Any suggestions for improvements, if we were to shoot the whole thing again ?

overall 23/38 responses had some criticism. Here is a Gauge chart to show which criticism was mentioned the most.

Class Feedback

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we showed the class our final piece and the raised a few good points :

• Phoebe said that she liked the voiceover but was confused about the 2 titles. we explained that the first title was wen Yasmin originally went missing and the 2nd title was the case reopening again as the year has changed from 2015-2016. Morgan also said that if the movie was to be released in cinemas you would know what the movie is called before viewing it.
• Sophie enjoyed the music but pointed out how the phone ringtone should be changed because it merged too much with the music playing.
• Katie also liked the voiceover as not many groups had done it
• serine also mentioned changing the names as it got a bit confusing.

Mock Feedback

by looking over my mock results I noticed I realised aspects that could be changed or added to improve my work. In Section A my analysis wasn't equally spread, meaning that some frameworks were analysed better than others. In section B I didn't use enough keywords which can be easily sorted out by going back over them.